<p>I will accept the waitlist but still thinking about how to write the essay… :(</p>
<p>I included the following things:</p>
<p>-Why I want to go to Davis (Show interest in the school! I stated it was my top choice, and said that I intended to visit their campus in person soon)</p>
<p>-How I could enrich Davis’ community (What special things about me make me perfect for their campus community)</p>
<p>-How Davis was a good fit for me (How Davis was able to fit all of my college “needs” academically, socially, etc.)</p>
<p>Good luck man. I know we are in the same situation :)</p>
<p>Great. I think this is good. I did not even mention how I can contribute to the UC communities in my application. Did you include this stuff in your UC application? :)</p>
<p>You should say, “My collegeconfidential screen name includes “moo,” which obviously demonstrates my passion for Cow Town.”</p>
<p>Haha, jokes aside. You should just be as genuine as possible in explaining your love for the school and the Davis community. Good luck!</p>