<p>i was trying to write an essay at one am last night and i got so distractd by the computer and i wrote a verrrrryy sarcastic essay about distractions of technolgy and demise of personal contact.</p>
<p>what do you guys think? too stupid? to impersonal?
anyone (high school grads ONLY) wanna take a look?</p>
<p>Write about yourself, not society. Whatever the topic, the essay needs to convey who you are and what you do. You can mention how this topic affects YOU and how it has impacted your life, but do not go on a rant about societal problems. Sarcasm is very difficult to convey in writing, try to avoid it in application essays.</p>