<p>Would someone be willing to comment on my UC 1st essay and provide constructive feedback? I would look at yours, too.</p>
<p>if yes, email me!</p>
<p>bump50char</p>
<p>I’ll take a look at it. Copy it (don’t send me a download, just copy and paste it) and send it to me in a PM.</p>
<p>I’ll help you too!</p>