<p>That was just a ploy for you to click on my post - but for real, I wondering if anyone would like to read my commonapp essay and critique the shtt out of it. I'm applying to CMU.engineering n a bunch of other schools n im holdin my apps til i figure out what im doin w the essay.</p>
<p>if ur willing - just post ur email here and ill send it to u asap. Thanks to all the playaz and playettes who step up n help me out!!</p>