<p>I wrote an essay for the common app that was a rough draft, and way too long. I gave my essay to multiple people that I know to edit, and ended up with two different versions. Is there anyone who would be willing to read over both versions and let me know which one your like better, if I should change anything, if I should combine the two, or if I should just start over all together?? Thanks!</p>
<p>I can look at both, but because I have about twenty other essays I’m helping other users with right now, I don’t think I’ll have time to offer specific feedback other than giving you general feedback about which one/if you should combine them, etc. PM them to me along with the prompt.</p>
<p>Thank you! I will PM you soon</p>