Bored? Read my college essay!

Applying to College
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<p>I'd greatly appreciate it if I could get some feedback.</p>

<p>At the moment it's almost an overview of myself as related through my parents, and I'm not all that happy with it. I'd love any feedback, both negative and positive. Also, I've considered focusing in on one or more of the aspects, rather than hitting each lightly.</p>

<p>Anyways, if you're interested, please post or PM me and I'll send it to you.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>Yay! Essays!</p>

<p>(That's an indication that I'd like to read it)</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>

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<p>i will read</p>

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<p>ill read--</p>

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<p>Moi aussi- please send it</p>

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<p>I'll read it too.</p>

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<p>I'll read it too</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee</p>

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<p>and beware of the 10 post rule.... Lots of people join CC just to steal essays...</p>

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<p>I'll read it if it's not too long.</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>ill read it too</p>

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<p>I'll read. PM me</p>

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<p>what is the 10 post rule?</p>

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<p>Cool ..reading essays though..... but try and be selective dude....it can be stolen..... I know a case personally.....and advise this everywhere.....</p>

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<p>Wow, how can low can a person be to steal someone else's valuable, carefully-written personal statement!?</p>

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<p>id like to read it</p>