Can any one proofread the essay for me please? It's really urgent.

<p>I am a typical Hong Konger. Hong Kong is different from other big cities in the world, If New York represents freedom and chances,then Hong Kong should be struggle and energy. Hong Kong is a beautiful and international city, since it was a British colony (now returned to China). Hong Kong is full of orient and western culture,So, I was grow up in such a city, when I was a student there, There were many different kinds of public holidays including Mid-Autumn Festival, Easter, Christmas and Buddha's birthday. I leaned English since I was in kindergarten, English is very important in Hong Kong. School in there has Many subjects for us to study, the difference is there is more must-take classes in Hong Kong. In my five secondary school years, my favorite class was Home Economic, It was fun to cook in school and I could bring the foods to home. This is the city I come from. To know what city I come from would be a good way to introduce myself.
I have been in for not even two years, but I hope that my passion in working and adaptable ability could help me to explore more in this country.</p>

<p>I was a monitress for three years and prefect for two year in my secondary school.</p>

<p>During the time being a monitress, I had to collect the homeworks or notices and sometimes if the teacher hadn't come to classroom on time, I had to go downstairs to look for her or him. </p>

<p>In form one, It was my first time be a monitress, It was honourable to be a monitress, but that was also the most busiest school year.
the most troublesome task was to collect things for teacher, some students are always delay to hand it what they should hand in eariler, and I might need to collect it in several times. Also some teacher might asked me to give out and make copies of notes.</p>

<p>The last year as a monitress in class was the most challenging year, I had less work to do but the class teacher like to ask me about the class situation.
But some classmate misunderstanded that, thought that I snitched on them. In fact, the class teacher just wanted to know more about the class, so that he can help us better.
Overall, I was happy to</p>

<p>to help them and become a responisble person.</p>