<p>this is one of my friends essay.</p>
<p>he is applying as a transfer student.</p>
<p>im swamped with work and cant revise it for a while.</p>
<p>Anyone care to tack a crack?</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>yeah sure, pm it to me or email me at <a href="mailto:playm8ker42@gmail.com">playm8ker42@gmail.com</a></p>