Can anyone please read my commonapp transfer essay?

<p>It's been a little hard for me to write this one because I'm trying not to overlap the content with school-specific essays. Some input would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks!</p>

<p>Sure, I already applied…PM me</p>

<p>I can help.</p>

<p>Sure, pm it to me.</p>

<p>I could help</p>

<p>Thanks guys! I’ll send it over by this evening. I’m having trouble cutting it down, and I really think I’m overthinking this one, so I’m editing it now.</p>