<p>Dear admissions committee,</p>
<p>When I write the last words to this appeal I want to be able to tell people
“I DIDN’T JUST FALL TO THE GROUND WITHOUT A FIGHT.” I want to be sure I did the best I could to get into csula. Knowing I tired my best is better than knowing I did nothing.
After receiving my rejection letter to CSULA I was very disappointed. Without thinking I hesitantly wrote my appeal. This is one of my top schools and I know it will continue to be. I’ve wanted to attend csula ever since I found out about it during elementary school. I will not give up on accomplishing my goal. I would really like to be part of a community that I enjoy being in. I feel like csula fits me really well. It isn’t to far from home, which helps me stay closer from family. After thinking about life and what comes after High school, I don’t really know where I’m going after because I have been rejected to all my schools. I applied to the hardest schools and knew I should have had plan B. I was really hoping csula would admit me. But when someone asks me, “Where are you going for college?” I answer, “I don’t quite know yet but you know I wont give up! I will appeal and put myself out there! I don’t believe the game is over, it still continues.”
During High school I know I did poorly my sophomore year. I don’t want to make up excuses for why I did poorly but I would like the chance to explain myself. My sophomore year of high school I was not able to revive high grades because my mom had injured herself and I had to take care of her. Which cut into my homework hours, chores, and study time. I had a really difficult time trying to get every thing done on time. Her injury had affected me a lot and I couldn’t concentrate. I now learned that I should have talked to my teachers about what was going on and they could of understood my situation better. But the next year during my junior year I improved my grades. I took two honor’s classes; Biology and Spanish and received A’s in both classes. When I set myself goals I can accomplish them.
Coming from a low-income family I was only able to take the SAT twice. If I had the opportunity to take it several times I know I could of scored higher. Coming from a Hispanic family my family wasn’t able to attend a college. But now that I have the chance to live in the United States, I can have this opportunity. I would really like to be the first student in my family to attend a 4-year university. It has been my dream to strive in life and help my family’s situation out.
Since I have always wanted be active student to the community I volunteered at the office of the San Diego city attorney my junior year. This has been one of my big accomplishments in life. It was an amazing experience and I even revived two awards from them. I hope to continue this through csula.
I know csula receives tons of applications and mine is not the best. I please ask you to review it over again and take encounter the challenges I faced. Please note that if you give me a second chance I will not let you down. My sat scores do not reflect me as a student. It doesn’t mean I slack off during class. If csula decides to admit me I will work twice as hard to get good grades. I really thank you for your time to read this appeal. I hope you reconsider my application. </p>