Can anyone rate my essay?

Hey everyone! I’m from India and I’m applying to PSU, MSU, OSU, UIUC. I’ve completed writing my college essay and I’m looking for someone who could rate it and give their suggestions. Can anyone share your gmail ID so that I could mail my essay to you?

PM them to me, and I’d be happy to help!

I’d be happy to help too! Current Cornell student here.