Can anyone read my essay plzz?

<p>hello, I will be a SR next year and I've started some of my Common Apps essay and was wondering if some of ya'll could give me some peer editing/review/feedback. And sorry not trying to be picky here but I'd appreciate it if you have some good experience with this stuff. I dont wanna PM it b/c I dont logon CC that often, so I really wanna do this via email. If you can help me out, please let me know. Serious helpers only PLEASE!! REALLY PERSONAL ! Thanks</p>

<p>p<em>hp</em><a href="mailto:fan@yahoo.com">fan@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p><a href="mailto:gari5891@yahoo.com">gari5891@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>Pm me your essay! My email is acting funky!</p>

<p>I'm serious. PM me if you need info. =]</p>