Can anyone read my essay, por favor?

<p>I've had my heart set on Yale for quite a time now, and, as we all know, one of the most difficult and trying parts of the college admissions process is writing the essay, and I was wondering if anyone out there (especially Yale students/alumni) could ease this process for me by reading over and commenting on my essay. Thank you very much!</p>

<p>HS class of '10. I've read a lot of Yale essays on CC, and I'd love to read yours too!</p>

<p>i'm in your admissions class and if you don't feel comfortable, i won't be offended, but i'd love to read it.</p>

<p>How long have you been working on it? Glad to see a fellow 09'er almost done with their essay :)</p>

<p>I will read and critique for you. I'm a grad student investigating Yale's programs, so no worries about competition.</p>

<p>I'm an '09er as well, so if you're not put off by that I would love to read your essay.</p>

<p>I'll read your essay but I'm not a Yale student or alumni</p>

<p>PM me if you like, as I like to read essays.</p>

<p>I'll read it for you...</p>

<p>I'll read it for you! PM it to me :)</p>

<p>same here! I'd love to read it. =)</p>

<p>pm it. i want to be an editor (if not journalist) so i could use the practice and can give good advice...</p>

<p>love to read it. im in the class of '11.... pm me.</p>

<p>i'll read it
i'm in the class of '10 so i'm not competing with you lol</p>

<p>PM if you want :]</p>

<p>I'm already in Yale <em>junior!!!</em> so PM it to me.</p>

<p>Full disclosure: I am an '09er.</p>

<p>But I am already done with my essays, so I'm glad to help!</p>

<p>Class of '10 here--I'll read it :)</p>

<p>I'm also applying this year, but if you don't mind can PM me^</p>

<p>Sure, I'll help you out. Just PM me!</p>