Can anyone read my "Why Columbia" Essay?

<p>Can someone - preferably experienced - take a look at my Why Columbia essay? I had a hard time fitting it in the space provided, and I hope someone can tell me if I have written what Columbia is looking for. Thanks!</p>

<p>there isn't a set something that columbia looks for in that essay, it's just asking you to list YOUR reason for wanting to apply.</p>

<p>I'll take a look =p</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>sure me too</p>

<p>i'll help :)</p>

<p>ill help ..</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>IvyLeague, your message box is full.</p>

<p>pm me if you want</p>

<p>I will take a look!</p>

<p>i'd like to help out too</p>

<p>ill read it too</p>

<p>you can PM me too if you want any more readers. hope i can help</p>

<p>i'l read it</p>

<p>sure, i'll give u som comments</p>

<p>I'll take a look, if you want.</p>

<p>hahaha,</p>

<p>Im sorry but you just bumped a thread from 2005. Pretty sure the guy is done with his admission, silly. :)</p>