Would anyone pls read my "Why Columbia" now?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Columbia University
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<p>I know it's a lot to ask, considering the app is due soon, but would any current college students be willing to glance over my "Why Columbia" very quickly? I have two versions, but I am having a hard time, so I don't know if I should submit one or just start over. I would really appreciate it.</p>

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<p>Please...anyone? I wrote a final draft- I'm just not sure if it is personal enough.</p>

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<p>600 characters... how personal could it be?
I'd be willing to read yours--I've submitted mine already.
PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I'll read yours and comment if you'd like.</p>

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<p>I can help critique and accordingly edit if you like as well, cj_svu6.</p>

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<p>Sure, I'd be happy to read your essay.
Just PM me :)</p>

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<p>i will
pm me please</p>

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<p>Guys, it's 1/6 ...</p>

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<p>^lol .</p>

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<p>@kwu, maybe he got an extension?</p>

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<p>wait, they extended it to 600 characters from 300?</p>

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<p>Yes, it was extended to 600 characters.
However, the application deadline remains intact.
01/02/2008.</p>