Can anyone read over my Cornell Arts & Sciences supplement?

College Essays
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<p>It's not too long (568 words <--will this be okay since the limit is 500?) and I'm planning on sending it in today. I just need someone to quickly look over it and offer feedback on grammar and content . It would be much appreciated! Fast(er) responses would be absolutely amazing, as I am sending it in very very very soon (AKA in a few hours).
Also, I may be a little choosy on who I send it to, just to be on the safe side >< It may not be all that good....BUT I REALLY WANT TO GET INTO CORNELL!</p>

<p>THANK YOU</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. :)</p>

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<p>Sent! Anyone else? :DD</p>

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<p>I’m an alumna of Cornell Arts and Sciences. You can PM it to me if you want.</p>

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<p>Thank you so much! Sent!</p>

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<p>Haha, sorry. This is the prompt:
Describe your intellectual interests, their evolution, and what makes them exciting to you. Tell us how you will utilize the academic programs in the College of Arts and Sciences to further explore your interests, intended major, or field of study.</p>

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<p>Sent in my app! THANKS EVERYONEE</p>