<p>I've spent so much time editing this, and rewriting and whatnot; I initially went through it with a "college counselor" who helped me to re-write parts of it and said it was good and well written. I just brought it to my english teacher, who basically told me to start over. Can someone PLEASE help me read it and go through it? I can email it to you, PM it to you, whatever. Just PLEASE help me out!</p>
<p>send it over, ill see if ill say it’s good or start over</p>
<p>just sent it…let me know please</p>
<p>I will be happy to read it for you.</p>
<p>I‘d love to read urs, send me through PM</p>