<p>I'm struggling a bit to see if this metaphor I'm using works and if it's not overplayed. I don't want it to be. I'd appreciate a fresh pair of eyes from someone who doesn't know my background or story. Reply and I'll PM you my essay. Thanks</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>Yea pm me it. I hope I can help</p>
<p>Is anyone willing to do an email then since I apparently can’t PM?</p>