Read my Supp Essay

<p>I feel as if it doesn't come off as compelling or interesting. It's not a clearly cohesive story, but all in all would really really appreciate some input. I don't have anyone around me willing to review it and I have little time.</p>

<p>To be clear, this is the longer supplement essay not the "Why Yale".</p>

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<p>Yeah sorry man i wasn’t aware at the time, and I wanted to reply to a PM that someone had sent me. haha truly sorry.</p>

<p>I can help you out. I’m good with essays. PM me.</p>