Can someone critique my Uchicago essay?

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<p>Essay question about why are you here and now somewhere else. Just need any feedback. Thanks!!!</p>

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<p>Ill give it a read</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read!! I can look over your quality of expression + grammar, though I must say I’m probably no help when it comes to how on earth you’re meant to answer the Uchicago essays. It would also be a massive help for me (I’m international and have NO idea where to start)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! Professional proofreader - there are no eyes better than mine.</p>

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<p>The essay this person sent me was copied, word for word, from the second essay in this thread:
<a href=“Post Your essay - University of Chicago - College Confidential Forums”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/university-chicago/164537-post-your-essay-p1.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;