<p>Hi there,
if anyone would be so kind as to look over that part of the supplement I'd be really grateful. I worry that I didn't emphasize enough how this effects me "day to say", or perhaps I took too long with the intro, or ended it too abruptly.</p>
<p>I'm a mess, huh?:)</p>
<p>I can PM to you if you PM me suggestions? Thank you</p>