Critique my why Penn essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>Anyone want to read it (preferably someone who applied/accepted already)? I don't really know if its in the ballpark or not.</p>

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<p>sure. ill read it, i am applying rd though, but i already finished mine and its about 7900/7900 characters so there is no room to steal. you can check my post about wanting some1 to crituq my why penn if u want.</p>

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<p><strong><em>bump</em></strong></p>

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<p>I will read it. pm me Not applying, very familar with Penn.</p>

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<p>what's bump?</p>

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<p>^When you want to move the thread from the second page to the first...</p>

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<p>I'll read it. I've already applied. PM me</p>

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<p>I'll give it a read and share any input. I've already finished my essay.</p>

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<p>pm me if you want another critique. thanks.</p>

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<p>sure. already applied.</p>

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<p>pm me - ive critiqued a few others already (and i already applied a few days ago).</p>

<p>lmk</p>

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<p>Sure. I can read it if you don't mind.
I'm not applying this year round.
Thanks</p>

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<p>PM me if you need another reader.</p>

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<p>love to. pm it if you want.</p>

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<p>if you are still lookin for comments, just pm me.</p>

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<p>I was accepted Wharton ED.. PM me if you'd like..</p>

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<p>ill read it. i applied there a couple days ago.</p>

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<p>Tehehe, in class I always have to proofread things. If you would still like, you can pm me and I'll proofread your essay.</p>

<p>Good luck btw! :)</p>

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<p>if u still need help, pm me.</p>