Can someone look over two of my essays?

Colleges & Universities A-Z Stanford University
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<p>Please reply and I will PM them to you (roommate essay and main). My english teacher liked them but I would like some feedback from all you guys. Thanks in advance ;)</p>

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<p>sure i'll read it.</p>

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<p>Sure, I will read it</p>

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<p>i''l do it</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to read them for you.</p>

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<p>pm to me if you'd like</p>

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<p>PM them to me if you still need feedback.</p>

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<p>I'll read them PM me</p>

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<p>I'll read it :)</p>

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<p>i can read em</p>

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<p>send away bud</p>

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<p>yup sure ,</p>

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<p>i'll read it. I'll try to reply back by tomorrow.</p>

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<p>im good at editing :) feel free to send them</p>

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<p>would be happy to look at them if you want more people :P</p>

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<p>sure ill look</p>