How about my personal statement?

Transfer Students UC Transfers
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<p>Would anyone be willing to help me out and take a look at my UC essay as well?</p>

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<p>Ill read it for you, PM me.</p>

3

<p>=) i will. PM me.</p>

4

<p>I give it a look.</p>

5

<p>suree ill take a look at it =)</p>

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<p>Hey thanks everyone.</p>

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<p>Need one more opinion? If yes then PM me.</p>

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<p>I could take a look at it.</p>

9

<p>i will too</p>

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<p>I will read as well.</p>