Would someone critique my UC essays please.

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of California - Berkeley
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<p>I'd really appreciate some productive criticism for my three UC essays.
Thanks :)</p>

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<p>you can PM them to me and I will read them.</p>

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<p>I can help as well.</p>

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<p>sure, Pm me</p>

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<p>i'd like to read it
PM~</p>

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<p>would the above kind souls help me with mine too?</p>

<p>i'll pm you guys anyway =)</p>

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<p>yeah pm me away. (both of you)</p>

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<p>yep, just PM me</p>

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<p>ill read them</p>