<p>Hello, I need someone to edit this essay because my bad grammar makes it sound bad. I think It has some potential in the hands of a good editor so please help me, I would really appreciate this.</p>
<p>Come on, can I just get one person to edit this.</p>
<p>Sure - send it to me and I will give it a shot. <a href="mailto:lvalente@epcss.net">lvalente@epcss.net</a></p>