Hi!
I’m an international student and I’m going to apply to US colleges this fall!! I wrote the first draft of the CommonApp essay, but need some feedback to know what’s good, what has to be improved etc. Is there anyone there who would be willing to help me please? (I’ll PM the essay) I would be very glad to help you in return !! 
Thank you really much in advance for your help!!!
Hi hi, I’ll be happy to give you some feedback! 
@CoolCake PM’ed you !
you can pm me the essay!
@Dartmouth_21 PM’ed you the essay, thank you for your help!!!
you can pm me too!
I’d be happy to help if you still want/need it
Hey I can look over your essay, but can you look over mine as well? Just pm me your essay and ill pm you my comments on it.
sure!
I’m a rising sophomore in college, send it my way and I’d be happy to critique it.