can someone please give me guidance on my essay?

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<p>I know this isnt the essay section but i just didnt trust it over there :p
i just started the essay and it is a very rough draft..can i PM to anyone for proofreading/guidance?</p>

<p>my deadline is nov.1st, so ive been panicking about finishing</p>

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<p>anyone? .
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<p>Parent/English teacher–I’ll give you an honest opinion.</p>

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<p>thank you so much! i PMed it to you</p>

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<p>Parent/write for a living - I will take a look.</p>