can someone please proof read my academic suspension appeal letter

Dear , to whom it may concern

My name is xxxxx and I am writing to appeal my suspension from southern university.It is my own fault that I did not meet the academic requirement because my health issues. Even though I had just given birth to my son I felt I was ready to start college. I even had a full time job. After some time went by I started getting confuse, and feeling very weak. So I went to the doctor and he informs me that had been blooding four months in my stomach from an ulcer, and my blood pressure was high. I still tried to continue but it got so bad I didn’t want to get out of bed. The doctor administered me some high dosages of Ferrous Sulfate 352, and some antibiotics. It did take a few months for me to start feeling better. My grandmother has move near me so she can help me with my son. I have also stopped working so I can devote more hours to school because this is my dream to become a nurse. I refuse to let anything or anyone keep me from fulfilling my goal.
I do realize that I abandoned my academic studies and I would like another chance to do better in them. I have assemble an arranged steps I need to take in order to be a successful student at southern university college:

  1. I will step down from my full-time job in order to give my undivided attention to my classes.
  2. I will talk to a tutor if I have any trouble understanding my class work by becoming familiar with the tutoring center on campus.
  3. I will talk to each of my professors one on one to find out how I can be a successful scholar.
  4. I will conserve my time prudently so that I can balance my son and class work together
  5. I will attend all of my classes to take benefit of what they have to offer.
    My goal is to earn a degree in Nursing . This is very important to me But I can only do this if I can i can further my education with southern. I am a hard-working student and a dedicated mother, and I would like the chance to prove to you that my next semester will not be a disappointment. I will try my hardest to be good role model to my son and other students.

Please find it in your heart to allow me another opportunity. Thank you for allowing me the time to express this issue with you.
Thank You,
xxxxxx