PLEASE READ. Letter for reinstatment.

<h2>Hello, I was been placed on academic suspension, I was wondering if anybody can proof read over my reinstatement letter. It would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.</h2>

<p>To whom it may concern,<br>
My name is _____ _____ . I am writing you in hopes of appeal the decision of my academic suspension. This will be my second year at South Georgia college, it has been a bumpy road, but I have identified my mistakes and have started a new road to success.
In my first semester of college, I did what every freshmen did, party stay up late, and party some more. I easily lost focus on what I promised my parents, and that was to handle my business and graduate. As the year progressed, my interest in school was decreasing, truthfully I stop caring. I can point out my weakness when it comes to school, such as communication and studying. I would avoid my professors even when I was confused with the material. I am not the social type, and just asking a question in class, would take me out my comfort zone. I am honest enough that my priorities where out of order, and I didn’t seek any help to get them straighten out. My second semester it got worst. Not fully understanding the consequences of not passing my courses, my poor grades continued and I am in this situation. Everything that happened this past year is my fault, and I am not blaming anybody. As I look back, I didn’t take full advantage of all the programs that can help me, such as the student success center, and the tutoring sessions on campus.
Needless to say, being out of school really opened my eyes, and now I understand that I cannot just skate by and expect to do well. If I am reinstated, I will focus harder on my classwork, communicate with my professor and classmates, and manage my time more wisely. I know that I cannot take school for a joke, and I expect to go above and beyond the bare minimum if I am reinstated. I hope you will give me a second change. Thank yofor considering my appeal.</p>

<p>Overall good but *** would you start with your name???</p>

<p>There are a number of typos and grammar issues that should be corrected. It’s good you’re owning up to your mistakes. Good luck to you.</p>

<p>Your overall message is fine, but you’ve made so many basic grammar, punctuation, spelling and usage errors that I think anyone reading your letter would wonder whether you belong in college. Do you know anyone with excellent writing skills who can help you edit?</p>

<p>Something that struck me was that you said you partied a lot but you then wrote that you aren’t a social type, you may want to use a different term (e.g. introvert) instead of “social type”.</p>

<p>It is a good letter, but you need to fix the typos. One change I would make is you didn’t do what every freshman does. I am sure there are a lot of freshman who understood their limits and passed their classes. What happened is you had a new level of freedom, and had not learned how to limit yourself.</p>

<p>Thank you everybody for the responses. This is just a rough draft, and i appreciate the criticism. Is there anybody would like to help me with my errors?</p>