Can someone please read my common app essay?!!!

<p>Please I'm freaking out. I feel like it's absolutely terrible and I need someone to confirm!!</p>

<p>Prompt:Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?</p>

<p>Is anyone willing to read it? Thank you</p>

<p>haha, I’ll read it</p>