Please read my common app essay!!

<p>This is my common app essay on "Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?". Please critique it, correct it, give some advice, comment on it... Anything that can improve it will be very appreciated! :)
Thank you so much!</p>

<p>i would like to read it for you.</p>

<p>I’ll help, please PM.</p>

<p>Would like to read your essay, please PM</p>

<p>I will read it, pm me :)</p>

<p>Send it to me</p>