<p>hi! </p>
<p>i admit that i am horrible at writing essays, but i managed to complete a first draft to the common app required essay. I chose topic #4, which is about an influential person and their influence on me. </p>
<p>i would really appreciate if someone could read my essay and provide some feedback. </p>
<p>thanks!</p>
<p>sureeee. pm me</p>
<p>thank you, i sent it over:] anyone else?</p>
<p>its definitely intriguing that you wrote you common app essay involving Lady Gaga … lol</p>
<p>sure! i would love to read it for you (:</p>
<p>I’d love to read it.</p>
<p>sure sure!! send it!
<p>I’ll read it; Gaga is great</p>
<p>I’ll read it! I love Lady Gaga too!</p>
<p>Haha Lady GaGa? I’ll give it read if you want! :)</p>
<p>I’m interested in seeing where you went with this. I’d love to give it a read.</p>
<p>I love Lady Gaga! I’ll give you some feedback. PM me.</p>
<p>Ill read haha</p>
<p>Send it to me. I’m curious on how you used Lady Gaga.</p>
<p>Sure PM me - sounds like a good topic</p>
<p>I’ll read it too! Am interested in how you wrote it</p>
<p>sent you a pm with edits, overall great essay. Best of luck</p>
<p>PM me. I’m obsessed with her!</p>
<p>I’d love to read your essay! :D</p>
<p>I am a huge fan, and I was personally trying to incorporate her in an essay, so this would be interesting! I’m also a little bit of a grammar-nazi, so please 
PM me!</p>