Can someone please read my essay?

<p>Can someone please read my main essay in common app? I really need feedbacks...</p>

<p>anyone?
Please leave a message. I 'll send it over.</p>

<p>PM it to me.</p>

<p>pm it over</p>

<p>sent!! thanks for the help!</p>

<p>ill read. btw u havent give me feedback about my essay... i need some critique</p>

<p>Yes, please PM it to me, and if you could, tell me the college you have in mind. I feel that the strength of the essay varies with what colleges an applicant is applying to.</p>