<p>I just need someone to proof read my personal statement essay, and help point out grammatical/puncuation errors.</p>
<p>I am not finished yet but Ii still would like to have someone let me know their thoughts on my essay.
Please give me your emails.</p>
<p>PM it to me</p>
<p>I need more posts</p>
<p>Any readers here. I need someone I can trust</p>
<p>If you can’t PM it, what are you asking for?</p>
<p>I can pm now. I want good writers reviewing my essay.It is only 700 words.</p>
<p>Okay, cool. Wanna swap essays?</p>
<p>PM me your essay</p>
<p>15th post!!!</p>
<p>I’d be happy to.</p>
<p>I actually am finished now.
(I need someone who is good with punctuation/grammar) I think I have mistakes in that area. Otherwise, I’m pretty happy with the content.</p>
<p>I’ll be happy to give feedback. I’m excellent with grammar.</p>
<p>My lungs fill of the freshest air, given off by the various species of trees, as I walk through the campus for the first time. I felt nostalgic, I felt at home, in a place I have never been before.</p>
<p>Okay here is my first two sentences. I’ll be honest, I think its good. But I’m killing myself on trying to improve. I am already 200 words above the general guideline for word count. So, I’m not going to be able to add much.
Should I change the first sentence to: As I walk through the campus for the first time, my lungs fill of the freshest air, given by the various species of tress.</p>
<p>^i have a few more days until submission.</p>
<p>My lungs fill of the freshest air, given off by the various species of trees, as I walk through the campus for the first time. I felt nostalgic, I felt at home, in a place I have never been before.</p>
<p>My lungs fill with the Magnolia scented air as I enter campus for the first time. I’m at home, comfortable, almost nostalgic for this place I’ve never been.</p>
<p>your verb tenses are a mess. As you walk, you felt???</p>
<p>I already changed that sentence. Yes, I walked, and I felt. It’s nice being able to do that.
Thanks</p>
<p>okay, I am ready to submit. Actually, I need to soon. The deadline is 11/1. Any final reads?</p>
<p>…^^submitting today</p>