<p>Hey guys. Thanks for stopping by. My essay's currently at 403 words and I'd like to know if I'm heading in the right direction about "a lesson I've learned and want to share with the university." All criticism is welcome.</p>
<p>Leave a post / PM me if you'd like to help.</p>
<p>Thanks again.</p>
<p>I can read yours- I happen to be pretty good at proofreading and correcting grammar and all that good stuff. Would you like to swap essays, though? I’m anxious to get some feedback on mine and too self-conscious about it to let my English teacher see it. I’ll read yours regardless of whether or not you want to swap, but I’d appreciate it if you can!</p>
<p>Of course I’ll swap with you. I’ll PM you my essay right now.</p>
<p>Okay! I’ll do the same.</p>
<p>Sure, I’ll definitely swap essays with you.</p>