Can someone read and give me feed back on my essay for apply Texas?

<p>Prompt:</p>

<p>Describe a setting in which you have collaborated or interacted with people whose experiences and/or beliefs differ from yours. Address your initial feelings, and how those feelings were or were not changed by this experience.</p>

<p>no one? really? I really would appreciate it!</p>

<p>I could pm you</p>

<p>Do post this in the College essays forum</p>

<p>i will edit it for you!</p>

<p>Thank you so much!</p>