can someone read my college app essay plss??

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>i know a lot of people have been recently asking but i would really like for people to read my essay and give honest feedback and constructive criticism. whether it be grammatical, organization, style, over all idea, anything.</p>

<p>thankyou!</p>

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<p>i will! 10 char</p>

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<p>actually ill email it to people because i cant send pm’s so if youre willing to read it leave or send me your email</p>