<p>I submitted this essay for my early action college, but after being deferred, I have a strong feeling that I should revise it. If anyone can give any feedback about the essay, it would be much appreciated.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>where were you deferred from ?
And PM me I will read it</p>
<p>@djgvolt If you got deferred, strengthening up that essay is a sure way to increase your chances of acceptance. Please send it over and I’ll give you my thoughts on it. </p>