Can someone read my common app essay please?

College Essays
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I’m writing a Common App essay on prompt 4: Describe a problem you’ve solved or a problem you’d like to solve. It can be an intellectual challenge, a research query, an ethical dilemma-anything that is of personal importance, no matter the scale. Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution.

I’d like feedback to see if I’m in the right direction or not. I’d like people to respond who aren’t applying to colleges this year and people with a higher post count. Sorry I’m just pretty paranoid.

Thanks in advance! :slight_smile:

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I’ll read yours and give you some feedback. Could you also give me feedback on my essay? and don’t be paranoid about it, I promise I won’t do anything to your essay. I have my essay to use.

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Bump

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I’ll take a look if you can give me a day or two to get to it.

(And I applied to college in 1976, and my son’s applications are all already in :slight_smile: )

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Sure…i can send you mine too