Can someone read my CommonApp essay and critique?

<p>It's about a car accident I was in, and I just want to be sure that the topic is ok and that the essay itself works.</p>

<p>In my opinion, I’m not sure if these traumatic experiences are a great idea.</p>

<p>My english teacher went over good and bad essay topics, and she mentioned the traumatic essay as one that is either hard to turn into a positive essay about yourself or just too much for the officer to handle. </p>

<p>Just a thought. I don’t think I’d be in a good position to give a critique on this since I’m not sure, so I hope someone else can help.</p>