<p>I think it's a little long :( First draft, by the way. I have yet to show it to my counsellor.</p>
<p>I'd be so grateful if you could read and offer constructive criticism. I'll PM it to those who have the time, thank you!</p>
<p>I will. I prefer to give feedback via IM though, so if you decide to PM me, do provide your Google Talk/MSN/Yahoo info.</p>
<p>Thanks, I PMed you.</p>
<p>send it over i will see how i can help</p>
<p>pm it to me too. ill see</p>
<p>I redid it a bit so it's a little shorter from before and I've PMed you two. Thank you!</p>
<p>will love to read it and comment on it.
just PM, I have all the time in the world =)
also provide your msn together with it.
thanks.</p>
<p>I'll love to read/offer some critique on it. PM me. </p>
<p>Disclaimer: I am an '09er though.</p>
<p>PMed you two as well; I changed it a bit after sending it however.</p>
<p>Thank you!</p>
<p>yeh i'd love to read it and maybe you can read mine when ive finished writing mine. PM it to me with your msn/email addy. thnx mate</p>
<p>PMed, thank you! :]</p>
<p>Me too!! :)</p>
<p>email@ <a href="mailto:iltistan@gmail.com">iltistan@gmail.com</a> if u like</p>
<p>I can read it if you still want more opinions.</p>
<p>I've PMed/e-mailed you all. Thanks again :)</p>
<p>Any more readers?</p>
<p>can pm me</p>
<p>not '09 btw</p>