Common App Personal Essay - An experience

College Essays
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<p>Hi guys, any feedback about the essay, from grammar the overall approach, will be greatly, GREATLY appreciated :). Thanks!</p>

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<p>I will read and critique it if you would like. Just PM it to me.</p>

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<p>PM it to me. I’m a grammar cop on every game and forum I can find. Thanks!</p>

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<p>sure…pm it over.</p>

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<p>send it over :)</p>

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<p>PM over. :)</p>

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<p>I’d take a look at it. PM</p>

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<p>I’m pretty good grammar wise, pm it.</p>

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<p>If you need additional feedback, PM me your essay with prompt or topic</p>

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<p>PM over. :0</p>

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<p>I’ll critique it, PM it over :)</p>

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<p>PM over if you would like to!</p>

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<p>pm me over. i can help you</p>

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<p>PM it over :)</p>

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<p>PM me please :)</p>

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<p>sure, I’d love to.</p>

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<p>I’d like to read it. I should be of some insight</p>

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<p>Sure; PM it or email it over at <a href="mailto:bleucrimson@yahoo.com">bleucrimson@yahoo.com</a> ; I’m a college student, so I really have nothing else to do as of the moment. :)</p>