Can someone read my essay? Please?

<p>It's for Worcester State College. The essay is optional, but I'm doing it anyway so I can demonstrate my writing and thinking skills.</p>

<p>This is the prompt: Describe the feelings you've had in the past three years about your educational experience. Be sure to mention circumstances which have had a special influence on your education.</p>

<p>I'm not as concerned with it as with my other essays because Worcester State's my safety, but I still really want to get into their nursing program.</p>

<p>I'll PM it to anyone who is willing to check it over. Thanks!</p>

<p>i’ll read it if you still want some criticism</p>

<p>bumpity bump</p>

<p>I’ll read :-)</p>