UC Prompt 1 and 2- need serious critique. Is it any good?

<p>Hello all. I have finally finished the uc prompt 1 and 2 essay. Would anyone like to read and give serious critique? I will PM them, or maybe I should just post it straight on here? Any advice would be appreciated and I would love if someone can read it. I am trying to show my love for nursing and why I should be accepted as a nursing major, which I know is very hard to get into. Thanks</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it! PM me</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>