Can someone read my essay rough draft?

<p>Hello. I had to write a 300 word essay for UIUC. I did the 2nd prompt which basically just asks for me to write about anything that I have not expressed in my application. Anyone willing to read it? Thanks.</p>

<p>bumpity 10 char</p>

<p>bump 10 char</p>

<p>PM me, i’ll be glad to read it :)</p>

<p>PM me (: i would be glad to read it</p>