Can someone read my essay?

[sostressed0]

Can someone please read my college essay? I’m trying to apply to Boston University and UMass Amherst and would like some constructive criticism. Please comment or PM me if you can help.
Thank you so much!

I’ll inbox you the essay if you’d like to help

[sostressed0]

bump

[mast98]

I’m willing to help if you’re comfortable with it!

[bjkmom]

I am too.

[skspartan]

so am I