<p>I really need some feedback for my essay... And I'm not even satisfied with it.. I think it's not that good for an Ivy league school.
Could you please critique my essay?
If you are willing to, please PM me.
Thank you!</p>
<p>i can read it</p>
<p>I really need some feedback for my essay... And I'm not even satisfied with it.. I think it's not that good for an Ivy league school.
Could you please critique my essay?
If you are willing to, please PM me.
Thank you!</p>
<p>i can read it</p>