Can someone read my supplement essay

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Michigan
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<p>Can someone critique my first U of M supplement essay please?</p>

<p>The question is:</p>

<p>Share an experience through which you have gained respect for intellectual, social, or cultural differences. Comment on how your personal experiences and achievements would contribute to the diversity of the University of Michigan.</p>

<p>any help would be appreciated, thank you.</p>

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<p>go for it. pm me.</p>

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<p>ill read it. this was defnitely what stood out the most (in my opinion) in my application to michigan. ill get back to you asap.</p>

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<p>Send it to me, ill read it.</p>

<p>Adam</p>

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<p>i can revise some things if you need help.</p>

<p>BTW, i already got accepted.</p>