I would really appreciate if someone could give me some feedback on my transfer Common App essay. This essay is going to three different colleges, and I’m scrutinizing this essay the most (dont know why) to make sure it answers the question perfectly and gets across to all the colleges. I’ve already applied to 4 other colleges, and only had to give short responses to those. PM me and I will send you my essay. Thank you!
My aunt is a creative writing professor at a nearby Uni, I can have her look over it for you and give you the notes.
If u still didn’t submit it send me it